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Monster Under My Bed Collab

I’m alone and scared laying in my bed with a cold wet sweat running down my head In heart pounding fear I will soon be fed To a big hairy creature of my dread A green ugly monster with long sharp claws Yellow spotted teeth and powerful jaws a long pointed tail and twelve massive paws Who take’s away children that break Mom’s laws 03/25/2023 For "Collaborate With Me" poetry contest by Joanna Daniel AAAA BBBB 10/10/10/10 For Children good and bad

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/30/2023 1:10:00 PM

Hi Darrel, Congratulations on your winning write. I echo what Linda said. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Darrell Rose
Date: 3/31/2023 11:36:00 AM

Hello ! What an enjoyable little exercise this was ! Joanna brought the nighttime drama to a delightful conclusion. Have a great day ! Darrell

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/30/2023 8:48:00 AM

Congratulations Darrell on your winning write. Great job!

Darrell Rose
Date: 3/31/2023 11:35:00 AM

Hello ! What an enjoyable little exercise this was ! Joanna brought the nighttime drama to a delightful conclusion. Have a great day ! Darrell

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/30/2023 7:45:00 AM

Can't wait to see Jo's addition. Congratulations on your win Darrell! :)

Darrell Rose
Date: 3/31/2023 11:33:00 AM

Hello ! What a fun little exercise! You can find the delightfully happy ending posted on my site. Have a great day ! Darrell

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/30/2023 6:27:00 AM

Hi Darrell, this one was great to work with, I gave it a little positivity, overall enjoyed, congratulations:)

Darrell Rose
Date: 3/31/2023 11:31:00 AM

Hahahahaha That is perfect ! A calm solution which keeps the monsters at bay! Thank you for the pleasure of joining you in this fun exercise! Have a great day , Darrell