Monster

Come with me lovely girl let your beauty unfurl put your trust in me and together we will be spend the night I promise i will hold you tight let me trace the perfect edging of your face move with the motions everything will fit into place the deed is done and later you see Im everything you hoped I wouldnt be

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2011 2:12:00 AM

wow! K.Y... glad you are no monster. How are you? Me i'm just stopping by to say hi and catch up on some of my reading. Love the meaning one can give another when it comes to reading poetry. Have yourself a wonderful evening. God bless & take care,..Linda

Ky Gatchell
Date: 8/15/2011 2:55:00 PM

everything is going good i finally start school on the 17th yaaaaaaaaaay! thank you bunches for commenting have an awesome day god bless :))))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2011 5:33:00 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us KY. I have enjoyed reading your fascinating writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Ky Gatchell
Date: 7/14/2011 12:02:00 PM

thank you lots :)