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Monsoon Sky

thick grey clouds in sky
huge chunks wrap the sun at dusk... 
orange rays peep out


Date: 07/04/2022
Submitted for: The Sky in July Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Bill Baker

September 10, 2022 at 2:07 PM

The vision is clear, well written Haiku, Ani. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Sara Kendrick

August 26, 2022 at 7:17 AM

Back with congrats. Way to go. Sara

Beata Agustin

July 18, 2022 at 10:42 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

July 18, 2022 at 10:20 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on your win. A wonderful Haiku sky write. Have a blessed day/week................

Andrea Dietrich

July 17, 2022 at 10:57 AM

I like your juxtaposition of the hopeful orange rays peeping out, Ani. Congrats with a great placement in my contest. Sure wish I could see one of those monsoon skies

Anitha Jayasankar

July 17, 2022 at 10:18 PM

Thank you so much dear Ria for the interesting contest and my placement... I enjoyed writing for this... Ah yes, I hope some day you would see those beautiful monsoon skies... Hugs... ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick

July 12, 2022 at 3:20 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. We have been having some nice clouds which help keep down the heat. Your visit to my page today was uplifting. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

July 17, 2022 at 10:17 PM

Thank you so much dear Sara... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani