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Monsoon Sky

thick grey clouds in sky huge chunks wrap the sun at dusk... orange rays peep out Date: 07/04/2022 Submitted for: The Sky in July Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/10/2022 2:07:00 PM

The vision is clear, well written Haiku, Ani. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2022 7:17:00 AM

Back with congrats. Way to go. Sara

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/18/2022 10:42:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2022 10:20:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on your win. A wonderful Haiku sky write. Have a blessed day/week................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2022 10:57:00 AM

I like your juxtaposition of the hopeful orange rays peeping out, Ani. Congrats with a great placement in my contest. Sure wish I could see one of those monsoon skies

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 7/17/2022 10:18:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Ria for the interesting contest and my placement... I enjoyed writing for this... Ah yes, I hope some day you would see those beautiful monsoon skies... Hugs... ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2022 3:20:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. We have been having some nice clouds which help keep down the heat. Your visit to my page today was uplifting. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 7/17/2022 10:17:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Sara... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/4/2022 1:31:00 PM

There is beauty that emanates even from dark clouds when sun shines at dusk--well painted scene, Ani.

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 7/17/2022 10:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijayji for the visit and comment... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/4/2022 1:05:00 PM

I love the pretty sky. It has so much to say. A wonderful Haiku write. Have a blessed day....................

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 7/17/2022 10:15:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Paula... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani