Monotangled whisp

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shed tears with no eyes spoke words but not wise - no one there just a disguise.

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Terry Miller

Date: 12/11/2023 12:56:00 AM

This is a wonderful and intriguing monoku; congratulations.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/11/2023 1:38:00 AM

Thanks so much Terry.

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 9:37:00 AM

Very interesting one liner..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/8/2023 2:04:00 PM

I believe the contest called for a hidden meaning. shh don't tell D, but this was just a ramble, no hidden meaning. I wonder if I was the only one without duplicate subject matter? Thanks for your comment S.O. Its always appreciated.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/7/2023 1:05:00 PM

Wow, quite captivating! Congratulations on your win~

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/8/2023 6:42:00 AM

Thanks so much Michelle.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 12/7/2023 12:35:00 PM

Not sure I'll unravel it SV but it ravelled me up with it. Congratulations on your placement x

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/8/2023 6:42:00 AM

Thanks D. Wasn't expecting this one to place.

Paige Hind

Date: 11/27/2023 3:51:00 PM

Very intriguing... enjoyed!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/27/2023 10:30:00 PM

This one is for Dilly's contest Paige. I wont explain it, because its for Dilly to unravel its meaning. Thank you for commenting. Lets see what Dilly thinks shall we ..heheheeh