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Monotangled whisp

shed tears with no eyes spoke words but not wise - no one there just a disguise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Miller Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 12:56 AM
This is a wonderful and intriguing monoku; congratulations.
Volumes Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 1:38 AM
Thanks so much Terry.
One Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 9:37 AM
Very interesting one liner..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Volumes Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 2:04 PM
I believe the contest called for a hidden meaning. shh don't tell D, but this was just a ramble, no hidden meaning. I wonder if I was the only one without duplicate subject matter? Thanks for your comment S.O. Its always appreciated.
Faulkner Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 1:05 PM
Wow, quite captivating! Congratulations on your win~
Volumes Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Thanks so much Michelle.
Hind Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Very intriguing... enjoyed!
Volumes Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 10:30 PM
This one is for Dilly's contest Paige. I wont explain it, because its for Dilly to unravel its meaning. Thank you for commenting. Lets see what Dilly thinks shall we ..heheheeh
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