Monorhyme On Vijay Our Poen

The most dedicated, obedient, one who rings bell,
One mighty who formulates sentient of time shell
By ringing school bell, making us aware, alert and knell.
Vijay, our peon, a smart, vigilant but never did yell
At teachers or students who bugged in room or cartel.
Fair looking Vijay is a joyous lad who got never expel;
Nor did he remain quiet in vespers nine to spread his spell.
Caring, gentle, cherishing, poor but self-efficient in nutshell
Can be told about him in this Monorhyme – describing well?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Williams Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 1:08 AM
I think you've written a great poem ,or should I call it an Ode to Vijay. You have described him well....Maria
Jain Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 7:45 AM
Thanks for your inspiring, kind, comfortable soft fingers, Maria. Your view is encouragement for me & Pari Style.
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