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Monorhyme

Matching like-minded zones
Multiple kindred cones
Myriad tribal bones
Misplaced grammar atones
Marriage of stars and stones
Mosaic blended tones
Merry musical thrones

10/26/20

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Angela Crabtree

November 5, 2020 at 8:03 PM

This is a magnificent rhyme, Michelle. I really love the way you have it formatted here. Saved to read again :)

Alexis Y.

October 27, 2020 at 10:22 PM

WoW! Michelle, What a good entry for the “ Pleiades 3” contest. And it’s in monoryme too. I would be surprised if I didn’t see you as a top contender with this well written piece. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.

October 28, 2020 at 9:17 PM

I still think this is impressive. Enjoy the rest of your evening:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner

October 28, 2020 at 1:51 PM

Sadly this didn't get a placement but am happy for your thoughts, thanks a bunch :)

John Watt

October 27, 2020 at 3:57 PM

How challenging this must have been to monorhyme with only 6 syllables allowed per line... you pulled it off adeptly, with your usual poetic grace. I thought I would like "Marriage of stars and stones" best, then I read "Mosaic blended tones". Let's call it a tie (and eat some scones).

Michelle Faulkner

October 27, 2020 at 10:16 PM

I actually considered using scones in the poem but thrones worked out better - am always happy for your feedback:)

Quoth Theraven

October 27, 2020 at 7:55 AM

Michelle, The Monorhyme that pulls back the blinds. Good luck in all games of chance. -Richard

Michelle Faulkner

October 27, 2020 at 10:18 PM

I've never been lucky at games of chance, but maybe that will change now!

Susan Ashley

October 26, 2020 at 7:47 PM

Your artistry and intellect never fails to amaze me, Michelle. Every moment of your poem is exquisite, but "Marriage of stars and stones" blows my mind! A wonderful entry for the contest. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my friend.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner

October 26, 2020 at 8:17 PM

You always brighten my day (or evening in this case) with your warmth and joyous spirit, Susan, hoping you are doing well~