Monoku-In the Summer Sun

Hi Brian, I love the few words, powerful punch, some times the fewer words the better, thanks for the comments on my write, take care D-nyce

Yes, I must agree with everyone else. The second line is extremely clever. Well done. Love, Shar

Hello Brian Really enjoyed this! The last line really gets one full of anticipation for the changing of the seasons'. We are just starting to see the first signs of fall here in Alaska so this poem feels right at home....Truly enjoyed Brian. Take care Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia

LOVE that last line - perfect word play, and a favorite image of mine for all time, leaves on the lawn. Brilliant Monoku literally, love Kristin

Brian, the lines come together and make a statement of nature and strength yet subtlety as changes occur. Wonderful writing. Michael

Clever piece of alliteration and word~play , Sir Brian..... Autumn leaves !!!! very clever.....