Constance La France Poet Monoku

Monoku - Pelican Wings

 
pelican wings wide   beautiful his face and pride   drops down to visit . . . 

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April 2, 2016


Poetry/Monoku/The Not So Original
Copyright Protected, ID 16-774-112-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


For the contest, The Not So Original Monoku Challenge,
sponsor, Timothy Hicks,  Theme - what I see image of pelican

Thirteen Place

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Poet Destroyer A April 10, 2016 at 10:54 PM Broken, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA Constance La France April 14, 2016 at 2:56 PM Linda, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2016 at 8:18 PM I agree with Laura. For me, it was one of the more creative ones and with that internal rhyme I really liked it! Congrats in the contest, my friend. Constance La France April 8, 2016 at 9:20 AM Andrea, thank you for that, no more needs to be said, I think you know how I feel about this ~

Laura Leiser April 7, 2016 at 4:11 PM I liked this one, and thought it should have placed higher, Connie. Congrats on your win :) Constance La France April 7, 2016 at 4:34 PM Laura, thanks for that, I sort of thought that also, I guess seeing the beauty of the bird was not original enough ~

Sara Kendrick April 7, 2016 at 3:34 PM Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara.. Thanks for all the visits to my page.. Constance La France April 7, 2016 at 4:35 PM Sara, thanks for the awesome, and the compliment, I was disappointed with the placement but I guess it does not matter when ones wings are broken already ~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores April 7, 2016 at 3:02 PM Congratulations on your win Constance. Constance La France April 7, 2016 at 4:36 PM Nayda, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 1:44 PM This was a welcoming sight and visit, Constance! Always welcome to drop in:) Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul Constance La France April 7, 2016 at 4:37 PM Paul, thanks for visiting, well 13th place is not really a win, obviously not original enough, I saw beauty where others saw a clumsy bird ~

Anisha Dutta April 7, 2016 at 12:04 PM Congrats BO for wonderful line to win. Anisha D Constance La France April 7, 2016 at 4:38 PM Anisha, I am assuming you mean BW, not sure who BO is, but if me thanks for the wonderful ~

Hansteven Selfa April 7, 2016 at 9:29 AM That's what I like about you Broken! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS Constance La France April 7, 2016 at 4:39 PM Hans, thanks for the compliment and visit, it was much of a win but I am still proud of my poem ~

Jan Allison April 7, 2016 at 6:29 AM Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France April 7, 2016 at 4:40 PM Jan, thanks for visiting, appreciate !

Timothy Hicks April 7, 2016 at 3:08 AM And a lovely visit it was :) Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest! Constance La France April 7, 2016 at 4:40 PM Thank you.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 7, 2016 at 2:53 AM Such a lovely monoku.. no wonder a win... big congrats Broken.. Constance La France April 7, 2016 at 4:42 PM Upma, thanks for the lovely !

Bl Devnath April 4, 2016 at 12:43 PM Beautiful colorful matching words you have used to draw this beautiful monoku. Good luck my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Constance La France April 5, 2016 at 2:42 AM BL, thanks for the beautiful !

Richard Lamoureux April 3, 2016 at 9:37 AM One of the best I have read so far. Good luck in the contest. Constance La France April 3, 2016 at 4:12 PM Richard, thanks for the compliment, appreciate !

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2016 at 3:14 PM awww, it's sweet, and I like how you did an internal rhyme! It should do well, Constance. Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 5:48 PM Andrea, thanks so much for the sweet and for spotting the internal rhyme, time will tell if it does well ~

Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2016 at 3:04 PM - A delightful visit :) - A great image line, B.W. - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 5:48 PM Anne Lise, thanks for the delightful and the visit ~

Jan Allison April 2, 2016 at 11:35 AM You sure are spreading your creative wings here Broken Wings good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 12:58 PM Jan, thanks for visiting with the compliment and hugs !

Sara Kendrick April 2, 2016 at 11:14 AM Good one..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 12:59 PM Sara, thanks so much for visiting my poem today, appreciate ~

Winged Warrior April 2, 2016 at 10:20 AM I love pelicans and your monoku Wings...^WW^ Constance La France April 2, 2016 at 12:59 PM Winged, thanks for visiting, the sun is shining on me today ~