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Monoku In Gondola

last night it rained hard in the gondola— I had no umbrella... ------------------------------------------------------------ New Monoku April 3, 2016

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/30/2016 10:08:00 PM

Nice one liner Probir.

Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 5/30/2016 10:09:00 PM

and Congratulations :-)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/15/2016 12:11:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this beautiful monoku my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2016 12:37:00 PM

Thank you...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2016 7:45:00 PM

Congrats to you . This was one of my favorites.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2016 12:38:00 PM

I feel honoured. Thank you...

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2016 11:42:00 AM

It's the 2nd time that I'm commenting on this monoku, Probir...this time I come armed with an umbrella:) Congratulations!! // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 11:49:00 AM

Great indeed and fortunate you are! Thanks and regards. By the way have you read my preterition?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2016 8:41:00 PM

Probir, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2016 8:44:00 PM

Thank you so much ~LINDA~ ...Love~probir

Paul Callus

Date: 4/8/2016 10:04:00 AM

Lovely monoku, Probir, but I'm afraid the romantic night was dampened! // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/8/2016 10:15:00 AM

In that case the monoku can hardly be lovely !

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2016 1:56:00 PM

Probir, wonderful !

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/4/2016 4:25:00 AM

Thank you B.W....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2016 1:07:00 PM

I really like this one, probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/4/2016 4:26:00 AM

I am honoured 'mam...