Monoku In Gondola

last night it rained hard in the gondola— I had no umbrella...
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April 3, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gazbowski Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Nice one liner Probir.
Gazbowski Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 10:09 PM
and Congratulations :-)
Devnath  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful monoku my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Gupta Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Thank you...
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Congrats to you . This was one of my favorites.
Gupta Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 12:38 PM
I feel honoured. Thank you...
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:42 AM
It's the 2nd time that I'm commenting on this monoku, Probir...this time I come armed with an umbrella:) Congratulations!! // paul
Gupta Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:49 AM
Great indeed and fortunate you are! Thanks and regards. By the way have you read my preterition?
A   Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Probir, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"
Gupta Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Thank you so much ~LINDA~ ...Love~probir
Callus Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Lovely monoku, Probir, but I'm afraid the romantic night was dampened! // paul
Gupta Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 10:15 AM
In that case the monoku can hardly be lovely !
La France Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Probir, wonderful !
Gupta Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 4:25 AM
Thank you B.W....
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:07 PM
I really like this one, probir.
Gupta Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 4:26 AM
I am honoured 'mam...
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