Constance La France Poet Monoku

Monoku - Beautiful Dreams

my dreams flow away  like colorful leaves floating  the trees are reaching

the river of life    where dreams linger on the shore    water worn pebbles

yet some still linger  and I hold them to my heart  oh beautiful dreams

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February 15, 2016

Poetry/Monoku/beautiful dreams
Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-084-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, River of Dreams,
sponsor, Poet Destroyer

Sixth Place

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Rhoma Em February 22, 2016 at 2:05 PM Congratulations on your win! Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 6:49 PM Rhoma, thanks for visiting for the congratulations !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 21, 2016 at 10:45 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Broken.. Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 3:45 AM Upma, thanks for the congrat and the awesome and wonderful, appreciate ~

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 10:41 PM thank you for the wonderful reply

Eve Roper February 21, 2016 at 9:01 PM Congratulations on your win , Broken Wing! Hugs Eve Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 3:45 AM Eve, thanks for the congratulations and the hugs ~

Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 6:58 PM Congratulations on your win! Great poem. Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 3:53 AM Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the great !

Paul Callus February 21, 2016 at 2:24 PM Very beautiful, Constance! Congratulations on a most worthy win. Regards // paul Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 2:58 PM Paul, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations, so grateful ~~

Sandra Haight February 21, 2016 at 12:42 PM Lovely, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'river of dreams' contest. Hugs, Sandra Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 2:58 PM Sandra, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations and hugs !

Bl Devnath February 21, 2016 at 11:14 AM A great congratulation my lovely friend on your win. Loved much ...."some still.....dreams". Loved always,bl Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 2:59 PM BL, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the love !

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2016 at 10:23 AM Using the pebbles to represent the dreams, that was so clever, Constance. you wrote an excellent little poem for this contest. Congrats for the win. Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 3:00 PM Andrea, thanks for the compliments and the congrats ~

Sneha Rv February 21, 2016 at 10:21 AM This is marvellous!! Congratulations on your wonderful win, dear BW!! :D :D Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 3:01 PM Sneha, thanks so much for the marvelous, the congratulations and the wonderful ~

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 10:11 AM Broken, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~ Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 3:01 PM Linda, thanks for the awesome contest and for my fine placement, I am deeply honored ~

White Sage February 19, 2016 at 4:46 AM that's a nice dream, beautiful indeed...well written BW Constance La France February 19, 2016 at 9:13 AM Sage, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the compliment ~

James Inman February 17, 2016 at 11:27 AM Very nice, BW. Great repeat of the word dreams. I didn't see this contest. Constance La France February 17, 2016 at 2:48 PM James, thanks for visiting, and the compliment, it probably filled very quickly ~

Steve Grammatico February 16, 2016 at 10:00 AM Vibrant images, Broken Wings. I really like this. Good luck in the contest Constance La France February 17, 2016 at 1:52 AM Steve, thanks for visiting, and for the vibrant ~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores February 15, 2016 at 8:21 PM Excellent monoku. My best wishes for the contest. Constance La France February 17, 2016 at 1:54 AM Nayda, thanks for the excellent, appreciate ~