Monoku

river rapids rocks twisting raving— tickets all sold out ~~~~~~~~~~ Entered in Monoku 1: Your best contest: Sponsor Silent One

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 2:56:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Mick.

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/2/2018 7:38:00 PM

Many thanks Line, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/28/2017 10:14:00 AM

Great verse, Mick, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/2/2018 7:39:00 PM

Many thanks Eve, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/28/2017 5:53:00 AM

Nicely done ... Congratulations ...

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/2/2018 7:42:00 PM

Many thanks Probir, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

James Inman

Date: 12/27/2017 6:49:00 AM

Multiple interpretations in your write Mick. Enjoyed.

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/2/2018 7:41:00 PM

Many thanks James, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2017 9:47:00 PM

Congrats for your win, Mick. Hey, your name is Mick and this poem made me think of Mick Jagger and the stones!!!

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/2/2018 7:44:00 PM

Many thanks Andrea, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2017 2:27:00 PM

- Well done, Mick - Much said a few words - Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/2/2018 7:45:00 PM

Many thanks Annn-Lise, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2017 2:22:00 PM

Nice one Mick.. Congratulations on your placement in the Monoku 1 contest

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/2/2018 7:46:00 PM

Many thanks S.O, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.