Monoku

river rapids rocks twisting raving—  tickets all sold out
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Entered in Monoku 1: Your best contest: Sponsor	Silent One

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Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 2:56 PM

Congrats on your win, Mick.

Mick Talbot

January 2, 2018 at 7:38 PM

Many thanks Line, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Eve Roper

December 28, 2017 at 10:14 AM

Great verse, Mick, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*

Mick Talbot

January 2, 2018 at 7:39 PM

Many thanks Eve, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Probir Gupta

December 28, 2017 at 5:53 AM

Nicely done ... Congratulations ...

Mick Talbot

January 2, 2018 at 7:42 PM

Many thanks Probir, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

James Inman

December 27, 2017 at 6:49 AM

Multiple interpretations in your write Mick. Enjoyed.

Mick Talbot

January 2, 2018 at 7:41 PM

Many thanks James, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Andrea Dietrich

December 26, 2017 at 9:47 PM

Congrats for your win, Mick. Hey, your name is Mick and this poem made me think of Mick Jagger and the stones!!!

Mick Talbot

January 2, 2018 at 7:44 PM

Many thanks Andrea, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 26, 2017 at 2:27 PM

- Well done, Mick - Much said a few words - Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mick Talbot

January 2, 2018 at 7:45 PM

Many thanks Annn-Lise, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Silent One

December 26, 2017 at 2:22 PM

Nice one Mick.. Congratulations on your placement in the Monoku 1 contest

Mick Talbot

January 2, 2018 at 7:46 PM

Many thanks S.O, appreciated! Happy 2018, Mick PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

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