Monoku 5 - Twilight

Monoku 5 - Twilight
	
	
	come to me twilight... become night’s silver full moon 






         Written 12.04.2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 11, 2013 at 9:40 AM
it is beautiful, Jack.... LINDA
Jordan Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 9:48 AM
As always, thank you for reading my work... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 3:53 PM
I read this again and liked it even MORE
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 6:18 PM
another beauty!! I sure am struggling for the perfect monoku for that one contest.
Jordan Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 8:16 PM
They aren't exactly easy. Seems like they would be. After all, it's just one line. I'm looking forwards to reading yours...
Sergi Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 5:55 PM
Jack you do have a true talent with the Haiku!!
Jordan Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Thanks again, Joseph... Jack
Gorelick Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 1:43 PM
Beautiful. BG
Jordan Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 2:03 PM
Thank you, Barbara... Jack
Tacito Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Fantastic! Embrace the moonlit nights and its depth!
Jordan Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 12:25 PM
Thanks Drake, as always... Jack
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 3:31 AM
- Beautiful, haiku Jack - you will get 4 from me :) - Not as nice as yours ... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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