Monoku 4

Monoku 4 an exceedingly terrible man transforming the power of the pen

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Date: 10/21/2014 1:30:00 AM

I feel like you're describing yourself in this Monoku... but that can't be right. You're not a terrible man, but a wonderful poet. Transform, away!

Date: 12/5/2013 6:19:00 PM

an interesting one! I wonder which is your contest entry?

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/5/2013 8:11:00 PM

The other one. This was just for fun...

Date: 12/4/2013 1:48:00 PM

- Well done,Jack ! :) .... fired up the fireplace with all the pencils... oxox // Anne-Lise:))

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/4/2013 2:56:00 PM

A good use for them I guess since true Okie winter arrives here tonight. Snow tomorrow... Jack

Date: 12/4/2013 11:07:00 AM

a driving force bringing much life to your splendid words, ajck.... nicely expressed!..huggs

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/4/2013 12:48:00 PM

I type with two fingers; typos are common... Jack

Nette Onclaud
Date: 12/4/2013 11:08:00 AM

JACK... butterfingers!