Monoku 4

Monoku 4 
	
	
	an exceedingly terrible man transforming the power of the pen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 1:30 AM
I feel like you're describing yourself in this Monoku... but that can't be right. You're not a terrible man, but a wonderful poet. Transform, away!
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 6:19 PM
an interesting one! I wonder which is your contest entry?
Jordan Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 8:11 PM
The other one. This was just for fun...
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 1:48 PM
- Well done,Jack ! :) .... fired up the fireplace with all the pencils... oxox // Anne-Lise:))
Jordan Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 2:56 PM
A good use for them I guess since true Okie winter arrives here tonight. Snow tomorrow... Jack
Onclaud Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 11:07 AM
a driving force bringing much life to your splendid words, ajck.... nicely expressed!..huggs
Jordan Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 12:48 PM
I type with two fingers; typos are common... Jack
Onclaud Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 11:08 AM
JACK... butterfingers!
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