Monoku 2

she knew of longing — this dream of love, alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Puddifoot Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 1:41 PM
interesting monoku, poignant, pulls at the heartstrings...I don't think the comment below is actual criticism, it just seems like someone being rather silly
Jordan Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 1:48 PM
You're probably right. In fact, I thought it was quite humorous.
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 3:22 PM
This is mooooooonnnnnnnnnooooooookkkkkkkkkkkuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
A   Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 9:26 PM
why Jack, this sounds like me... :-) always a fan ~ Linda
Jordan Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 9:31 PM
I'm a fan in return... Jack
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