Monoku

With nothing to say, remember, the broken clock, is right twice a day.
                                          
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"monoku" contest sponsored by: Constance --the  Rambling Poet

© 04 Dec 2010 Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations ..Sara
Roberts Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:45 AM
too right, congrats on your win in the contest Charles
Cwiak Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Yes, Charles, you are correct. It only tells us that time never stops, even when we try to make it so. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Radke Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Oh, this is perfect. Well said, and I like how you did not attach a title, thus staying, I believe, in the correct spirit of this type of poetry. Congratulations, Charles, on your winning position in the contest. It is most deserved with this very witty monoku.
Duffin Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 9:50 PM
wow, how profound!! LOVE it, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 7:40 PM
Congrats Charles on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line my friend.. enjoy another top ten sweet victory with luv..
Freeman Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:51 PM
Yep you got it Charles. Congratulations on a worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:31 PM
where oh where has my monoku gone (tickle) ;) If you have a minute can you comment on my blog? Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 2:36 PM
Many congratulations Charles on your win in Constance's contest >> James
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Soup mail returned, Charles.
Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Got a chuckle..Reads like a winner to me..I am so glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...I was delighted that you stopped by and read my work..It made my day..Sara
Haick Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 11:10 AM
This is amazing, Charles! Good luck in Constance's "Amazing Line" Contest! Soup Mail. Blessings for the season and always to you and family! Love, Audrey
Devonshire Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Yes it is, Charles! Great monoku. Even the weatherman is right sometimes (by chance - LOL). Best wishes in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:44 AM
good one, witty line, good luck in the contest
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Wonderful thought, Good luck, Charles
Horsman Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 12:33 AM
brilliant Charles, Constance will just love this, so do i. Harry
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