Monoku 1

a pirate ship floats past - my back, wet with dew

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Date: 1/27/2016 7:25:00 PM

oops, I missed the mark on my interpretation of this but now that I know what it is showing, I love it even more.

Date: 1/27/2016 2:43:00 AM

Congratulations!

Date: 1/26/2016 11:30:00 AM

DAVID, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **

Date: 1/25/2016 7:21:00 AM

Great write, David.

Date: 1/24/2016 8:53:00 PM

DAVID, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --

Date: 1/10/2016 6:44:00 PM

awww, this one makes me think the guy was taking a nap and got left by his mateys!! Did I get it right? Sure a cute one.

David Mohn
Date: 1/10/2016 9:40:00 PM

Hey Andrea - Thanks for stopping by...it's actually someone lying on wet grass seeing objects in the clouds...have a wonderful new year!

Date: 1/10/2016 2:23:00 PM

Your creative imagination runs freely, David! You write these short lines with ability. ~ Regards // paul