Monoku 1

a pirate ship floats past - my back, wet with dew

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Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2016 at 7:25 PM

oops, I missed the mark on my interpretation of this but now that I know what it is showing, I love it even more.

Susan Gentry

January 27, 2016 at 2:43 AM

Congratulations!

Skat A

January 26, 2016 at 11:30 AM

DAVID, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **

James Inman

January 25, 2016 at 7:21 AM

Great write, David.

Poet Destroyer A

January 24, 2016 at 8:53 PM

DAVID, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --

Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2016 at 6:44 PM

awww, this one makes me think the guy was taking a nap and got left by his mateys!! Did I get it right? Sure a cute one.

David Mohn

January 10, 2016 at 9:40 PM

Hey Andrea - Thanks for stopping by...it's actually someone lying on wet grass seeing objects in the clouds...have a wonderful new year!

Paul Callus

January 10, 2016 at 2:23 PM

Your creative imagination runs freely, David! You write these short lines with ability. ~ Regards // paul

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