Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

The Verso-Rhyme is:

- a poem in 8 lines with a syllabic count of 6-4-6-4-6-4-6-4…

- it has a rhyme scheme , xaxbxaxb. ( x being unrhymed)…

- this is written without punctuation except an exclamation in the end...

Monochrome Memories

As fragmented skies weep
My night of gray
Monochrome memories
And cobblestone
Dreams silently await
The break of day
when suddenly I hear
The telephone!  

Written by Emile Aug. 19th , 2015 for “VISUAL OF A VERSO - Poetry Contest”

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Kp Nunez August 20, 2015 at 7:32 PM Did the phone ring just when you were about the write the last line, hence the exclamation? Another awesome write, Emile. Kim :-) Emile Pinet August 21, 2015 at 8:58 AM Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.

Jack Horne August 19, 2015 at 2:44 PM lovely write and a form I've never come across before (must try it) Emile Pinet August 19, 2015 at 2:57 PM Thanks Jack, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Anu Nayak August 19, 2015 at 1:03 PM Dear Emile, wit of your soul seen in the brevity and beauty of this poem! waiting is on....for the someone special....too good...good luck for the contest...love, Anu:-) A 7!! Emile Pinet August 19, 2015 at 2:58 PM Thanks So much Anulaxmi, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Eileen Manassian August 19, 2015 at 11:05 AM WOW! :) This is wonderful. Thanks for teaching me something new. I can see why that last line would need an exclamation mark. Good one, Emile. :) Emile Pinet August 19, 2015 at 2:59 PM Thanks Eileen, I appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.