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Monochrome Memories

As fragmented skies weep
My night of gray
Monochrome memories
And cobblestone
Dreams silently await
The break of day
when suddenly I hear
The telephone!  

Written by Emile Aug. 19th , 2015 for “VISUAL OF A VERSO - Poetry Contest”

Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2015

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Kp Nunez Date: 8/20/2015 7:32:00 PM Did the phone ring just when you were about the write the last line, hence the exclamation? Another awesome write, Emile. Kim :-) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 8/21/2015 8:58:00 AM Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.

Jack Horne Date: 8/19/2015 2:44:00 PM lovely write and a form I've never come across before (must try it) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 8/19/2015 2:57:00 PM Thanks Jack, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Anu Nayak Date: 8/19/2015 1:03:00 PM Dear Emile, wit of your soul seen in the brevity and beauty of this poem! waiting is on....for the someone special....too good...good luck for the contest...love, Anu:-) A 7!! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 8/19/2015 2:58:00 PM Thanks So much Anulaxmi, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/19/2015 11:05:00 AM WOW! :) This is wonderful. Thanks for teaching me something new. I can see why that last line would need an exclamation mark. Good one, Emile. :) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 8/19/2015 2:59:00 PM Thanks Eileen, I appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.