Monochromatic Dream

I feel I am in this dream,
Where I experience bliss supreme.
An inner world that till today was unseen,
Things unfolding in an outlandishly beautiful scene.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sergi Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Congrats on your win, Surjai.
Jumani Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Thanks Ralph
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April 18, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Glad you liked the contest, suraj...Linda
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April 18, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Beautiful win with beautiful poem my lovely friend. Congrats. Loved always, bl
Jumani Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Thanks BL
Allison Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:48 PM
lovely interpretation of the image congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Jumani Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Thanks Jan
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April 18, 2016 at 1:59 AM
Suraj, Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~
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April 18, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Thanks Linda, was a nice experience being part of the contest.
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