Monkey

I have always wondered what it would be like to swing from a tree. To hang around and eat bananas all day. Playing peek a boo or chasing an animal or two. If I could be any type of animal I would live life in trees. I consider this animal to be very smart and intelligent, Sly and quiet on a summers night. Loud and noisy during the day This would fit me to a tee if I could be a monkey! Cory long 4-30-2011 Kristen Bruni "If I could be any animal" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in poet Destroyer's "Best Pet Or Animal Poem" contest Cory. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/4/2011 11:03:00 PM

Oooo OooooO Ahhhhh Ahhhhh! lol. Parents raised a monkey when I was a young lad...it destroyed our curtains and had to be diapered! Cory--it you plan on wearing a diaper you could be a house monkey! ha ha. Just monkeying around here!...U described moneys positive attributes well in this write...I was thrilled to see this in one of the top spots. Great job. Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2011 1:31:00 PM

LOL Congrats to you, Cory : )

Skat A

Date: 6/4/2011 12:55:00 PM

great job in contest Luv*Skat

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/4/2011 12:29:00 PM

Wow,what an awesome write Cory!!Many Congrats on your win.monkeys ..now I'll see them in a different light ..a wonderful weekend to you ,gautami

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2011 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of p.d., Cory

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2011 8:54:00 AM

I loved this the first time I read it, Cory. Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest! Love, Carolyn

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/4/2011 8:37:00 AM

Congratulaions on your placement, Cory. Great stuff. :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2011 8:13:00 AM

Congrats cory on another wonderful win with this great monkey treat my friend and buddy .. enjoy .. a special win..luv..

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/4/2011 7:39:00 AM

Great write. Congratulations on the win.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/4/2011 7:11:00 AM

Great job Cory. Congratulations on a big win. Love, Joyce

Joseph Osita

Date: 6/4/2011 3:57:00 AM

Congrats on your 2nd place win*cheers*

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/23/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congrats to you on this fine win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Cory. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 5/21/2011 12:11:00 PM

Many congrats on your win : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2011 9:43:00 PM

congrats on your awesome win, Cory! Way to go!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/20/2011 6:32:00 PM

Nice write here cory.Congrats on your win..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/20/2011 3:20:00 PM

monkeys are playful! congrats to yuo for the shining win, cory! :) huggs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2011 2:17:00 PM

You must have a fun-loving nature, Cory. Monkeys may be smart, but they do enjoy playing. If we ever meet, let's "hang around and eat bananas all day." Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/20/2011 2:15:00 PM

Congrats Cory on your great win in the animal contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/20/2011 2:00:00 PM

congratulations on the win in the contest of kristen, cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2011 6:31:00 AM

Aha!! I found it, and you chose your animal very well, Cory. I am glad to hear you like to make some noise! It's good to have a quiet side AND a let loose noisy side! Cute poem.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/4/2011 7:25:00 PM

This sure is a fun, write Cory-- I sort of imagined being one myself, haha manily because Debbie Guzzi mentioned I was a little monkey, so it got me wondering-- very cute entry for the contest :) Wish you the best :)

Michelle Campbell

Date: 5/2/2011 7:04:00 PM

Enjoyed this very much. Thank you for your comment on my poem

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2011 11:14:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading..That topic would be something to think about..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara