Money Bags

Dark circles cradle her eyes
enlarged they turn grey
when will she realize
as she hustles everyday
when it's in her hands it sours
still there's no sanitizer
to remove the stain that devours
the sweetness left to the analyzer
I lose no sleep anymore
I've come to peace with my desire
yet she thinks of this green evermore
and wakes up every hour to acquire
she gets her assistance from friends
and family as well
when she cleans her face the tear ascends
out of eyes that swell
I wish her not for richness brags
but for abundance instead
sleep well my little money bags
for her my heart has bled

*This poem is about a friend of mine. It's not about me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:16 AM
I feel bad for people who exchange their lives for money. Well expressed.
Crabtree Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Thank you, Richard :)
Downing  Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 10:53 AM
Another excellent write my friend :)
Crabtree Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Thank you, Akkina :)
Proxenos Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 11:31 AM
The bible talks of money as evil many times, in each generation of history and every era, money has brought misery, boredom, drug addiction. Money is power and power is abused. It is one of my favorite subjects to debate about. Awesome write, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Crabtree Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. Yes, money is behind it all. Wishing you a wonderful weekend :)
Callus Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 2:00 PM
Money is often termed as an evil necessity. Unfortunately greed can dirty that money, and yet for some it means enough to live another day. ~ Best regards // paul
Crabtree Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Thank you, Paul. You're absolutely correct. Hope you're having a great weekend :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 11:05 PM
Is this a poem on avarice for money? It is great as a dark poem. Money alone does not bring you happiness.
Crabtree Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, Victor. Yes, it's about greed. Have a great weekend :)
Horsman Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Excellent poetry, Angela, on the dark side of life.
Crabtree Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, Harry. Wishing you a wonderful weekend :)
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