Monet's Weeping Willow ~ekphrasis

Solemn and still, barely breathing
Arms weighing heavy lain with burden
Always standing, never sleeping
Constantly changing, nothing certain

Crying out for many lives lost
The tragedy and severity of war
Men and boys have paid the cost
This willow weeps, praying, “No more.”

 



Claude Monet “Weeping Willow”
Oil on canvas 1918-19
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Claude_Monet

For Brian’s Picture Poems contest


Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend
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Strand Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 8:42 AM
Thank you for comments on my posting today Lolita.Rgds Brian
Mckenzie Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 7:29 PM
Lena what a great poem for such a wonderful painting well done! I love this line"Solemn and still, barely breathing" Good luck in the contest! Laura :)
Winter Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Lolita, the painting is outrageously amazing, and your beautiful words do it great justice. Good luck in the contest! Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 5:17 AM
Wonderful writing in this piece. lovesd it very much.. Best wishes in the contest.
Reynolds Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 2:04 AM
Beautiful dedication to my most favorite artist, gorgeous work. love, Kristin
Strand Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 12:48 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Lolita.Rgds Brian
Napalm Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 10:25 PM
Great write Lolita. Captures Monet's "Weeping Willow" magnificently. Love and Luck- Skylar. Thanks for all your comments and amazing writings =]
Moreno Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 10:03 PM
Beautiful work Lolita and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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