Monday June 28

Monday's not fun days
Clouds make gloomy face
Brittany got free

Tuesday rain a pain
Danny hovers close
Droplets hit the earth

Dusk, dawn, hold the phone
Wait, who calls today?
Type, type, text, who's next?

(References to Brittany Spears and Danny the tropical storm)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goff Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 5:07 AM
Just dropping by to say hi Doris...jimbo
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August 7, 2021 at 3:01 PM
Glad you got the rain you sure can send it our way. So many fires and smoke in the air makes it hard on everyone. Hope all is well with you and your family. love phyl
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June 30, 2021 at 3:38 AM
Monday, a busy day. We went to check on your Aunt Bobbie and Uncle Jimmy. I was glad it rained and watered everything in the garden. We have an overflow of hot pepper. We can't eat the cow horn(too hot) but I made some hot pepper sauce. Mom
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June 29, 2021 at 7:57 PM
wonderful write, i was not aware of Danny but new of the Brittany news.. hope you are safe from the storm... fun read! hugs
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June 29, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Wow Doris you have not lost any of your poetic magic, seeing you at my page, is a breath of fresh air. Hope all is well with you..Keep safe Harry.
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