Monarch Sashays

in blankest hour of night, a monarch sashays on winged dance...flaming the sky.


Contest of PD A:In One Line ( Monoku #8)
2/23/2016

butterflydancemonoku

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Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2016 at 6:47 PM

Love your use of the word sashays and the last part, flaming the sky. Awesome image, Nette.

Vladislav Raven

March 13, 2016 at 11:43 AM

Hi Nette, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Loved your take on the pic. A seven from me....Vlad.

Paul Callus

March 13, 2016 at 5:26 AM

This is a lovely take on this suggestive picture, Nette! The verb 'sashays' provides a delightful butterfly movement. Congratulations on your fine win! hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A

March 12, 2016 at 8:48 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA