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Monarch Sashays

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in blankest hour of night, a monarch sashays on winged dance...flaming the sky. Contest of PD A:In One Line ( Monoku #8) 2/23/2016

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/13/2016 6:47:00 PM
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Love your use of the word sashays and the last part, flaming the sky. Awesome image, Nette.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/13/2016 11:43:00 AM
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Hi Nette, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Loved your take on the pic. A seven from me....Vlad.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/13/2016 5:26:00 AM
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This is a lovely take on this suggestive picture, Nette! The verb 'sashays' provides a delightful butterfly movement. Congratulations on your fine win! hugs // paul
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Date: 3/12/2016 8:48:00 PM
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Nette, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA
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Harry Horsman
Date: 2/24/2016 3:49:00 PM
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What a lovely poem nette, love this,
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/24/2016 1:43:00 PM
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This is lovely Nette. ;)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 2:25:00 AM
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"... on winged dance." I love that. Very nicely done.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/23/2016 12:24:00 PM
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Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Good luck, bl
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Elaine George
Date: 2/23/2016 11:58:00 AM
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Absolutely beautiful in keeping with the image. Sure to top the winners list, dear Nette. Elaine
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/23/2016 8:17:00 AM
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Just beautiful dear, nette!
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/23/2016 4:31:00 AM
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as only Nette' could say!
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