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Monalisa Footle

veiled grin truths thin still air lost stare eyes drift time shift words none gaze won dusk face no trace hands stay midway thought locked heart blocked

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Valsa George

Date: 5/10/2025 5:25:00 AM

Indeed a lovely set of footles. Your description matches so well with Mona Lisa. I had the fortune to visit the Louvre Museum in Paris during our trip to Europe in 2024. Congratulations on your win, dear Jcb. Brul.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 5/7/2025 9:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/7/2025 8:02:00 AM

Dear JCB, your ink is stunning in its simplicity and depth. Each couplet feels like a held breath-so much unsaid, yet everything felt. The pauses, the drifting, the blocked heart, it’s all so quietly powerful. Minimalist poetry like this lets me fill the silences with their own ache. I love your stillness and your honest, veiled emotions. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/7/2025 7:24:00 AM

Very well-composed footle! Your analysis is absolutely true. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/6/2025 3:31:00 PM

Interesting! I can see you standing in Paris at the Louvre looking through the glass at her smile! I found I liked her. Nice footle!

Tom Woody

Date: 5/6/2025 6:14:00 AM

Nice interpretation JCB. Have you ever seen the AI take on Mona? It's very cool to watch her come alive, even if it's not real