Mona Lisa

MONA LISA Moving on through this life is really so hard Of course, without your undying love Now that you look straight into my eyes And I can't decipher your enigmatic smile Love, cry it out! If love really hurts So everything that bothers you would escaped And dry your tears because my heart would really break!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/15/2012 6:39:00 AM

awesome poem Jun...thanks for sharing. Have a nice day! (^_^)

Jun Tumalad

Date: 8/23/2012 5:26:00 AM

Love is the antidote for someone's heart that is already dying. I believe that someone's heart is our mightiest weapon against the scourge of a great storm... And life will be useless, without someone to share the love.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2012 5:23:00 AM

A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jun. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Jun Tumalad
Date: 8/23/2012 5:10:00 AM

Thanks, Carol, I really appreciate it. Same here. Now, I could reach every heart all over the world to spread the love even through acrostics. Love, jun

Tanya Harrington

Date: 8/20/2012 1:02:00 PM

Well done, love the 'enigmatic smile'. Welcome to the Soup. :) Tanya

Jun Tumalad
Date: 8/23/2012 5:11:00 AM

Thank you, so much. Love, jun