Mommy's Unborn Angel

Mommy I could have loved you.
But you didn’t give me a chance.
Now since I’m free,
With the angels I dance.

Mommy didn’t you love me?
I guess I wasn't wanted.
When those evil monsters grabbed a part of me,
I felt like my life was becoming haunted.

Mommy how could you let them do that?
I felt more pain then you.
But as I took my last breath,
I received my wings and flew.

I flew to a place that would make me feel better.
Here, there are no worries.
I feel as light as a feather.

At times I still think about,
The love we could have shared.
Even if you felt no love,
Having me around showed that someone cared.

We could have went to parks.
Enjoying my toddler years.
Whenever I would have a nightmare,
You would help me overcome my fears.

Then when I would graduate,
You'll would be in the audience cheering for "your baby".
I'll be in my cap and gown laughing at how my mom is so crazy.

But with all of those good times,
There would have to be bad ones too.
But mom everyone goes through the struggles.
Don't think all the pressure is being pushed on to only you.

Even though you allowed them to take my life,
There could never be any hate.
So all I have to do is sit here...
...And wait.

I will wait until you become an angel.
Then I could see you once again.
We could sit down and sip tea,
As I reminisce with an old friend.

Mommy I still love you.


Mothers to be, please think before you act.!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/20/2010 7:40:00 AM
Very sad poem but it seems to be a part of many a young womens lives these days. Jerrika welcome again to PoetrySoup. We are like family here and the way to get your poetry read by more people is to also read theirs and comment. There are a lot of wonderful poets here and we all like to help others grow in their writing. You might wish to check into the contests sponsored by other poets here and enter their contests. Please keep writing. Love, Carol
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