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Mommy Fixed Pancakes

~      *              o                         
*     `~                         ~         *
     o           ~    *                                 o     
    *                ~   [     ]           ~
           ________ [      ]___________________~
         /  In the early morn the house  is chill  /   \
       / with children still asleep in their bed. /       \
     /     In my warm robe I amble down     /    [+]  \
   /     the stairs and place a few logs      /   -~ `    , \
 /      and kindling in the fireplace         /-~    ‘ .  `   ,  \
======================    /                        \
l Warming glowing flames perform       l     [ + ]  [ + ]   l
l curling, swaying, and cracking           l                        l
l       Pancakes and bacon                   l         [  +  ]       l   ` 
l   the children yell as they run            l         [  +  ]       l  `'`'
l    downstairs for breakfast                [-------           -----]  `'`'`'`'`'
l Mom asked with a smile, “Did you wash your hands “ -----‘   `   ‘    `    ‘   `   ‘------‘   `   ‘    `    ‘   `   ‘-----------‘   `   ‘    `    ‘   `   ‘  '''```      '''''''''''''       '    `'''```'''                                                          11/29/2016

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Sathasivam Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Wonderful write. Very impressive. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Green Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 6:13 AM
That is some very impressive art work Eve. The poem was fun and brings back some memories to me from when I could smell the bacon as I woke and knew mom was in the kitchen cooking breakfast.
Nnoli Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 5:25 AM
Hmmm what a lovely poem it reminds me my childhood days! I love your act and the way you wrote this poem, moms are always the best and moms food are so delicious lol! Richard
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 4:05 AM
- A wonderful poem .... and a great shape Eve - You are creative and clever with this form! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 3:44 AM
Impressive! This is so well done Eve. Hugs Rick.
Smith Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Such beauty Eve...i'll be right over for a double stack
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Thank you, Tim a stack waiting :-) Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 9:20 PM
I love pancakes! Yum yum! A very clever poem, Eve. It gave me a warm feeling inside.
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Thank you, Rick, I'm glad you enjoyed Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 8:31 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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