Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Moments With the Moon

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I saw the moon beyond the mist
its glow this darkened sky, it kissed
Through branches of an old oak tree
as if it waited there for me

So as I gaze upon these skies
awaiting on the sun to rise
I’ll stand here as it’s coming soon
and spend these moments with the moon


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Jean Bush February 11, 2020 at 2:16 PM You really love the moon, don't you? Your lovely, lyrical work shows it clearly. Chris Green February 11, 2020 at 4:01 PM It does inspire me. Thank you again Jean.

John Hamilton February 10, 2020 at 9:40 AM Great write Chris I love everything about the moon! Chris Green February 10, 2020 at 10:20 AM Thanks so much John.

Jennifer Proxenos February 10, 2020 at 9:19 AM The moon's face always looks as if it looking at all of us - I'm sure the moon loved the fact that you chose to spend those precious moments looking back at its wondrous romantic aura. Loved and faved this poem. Blessings, Jennifer. Chris Green February 10, 2020 at 10:20 AM Thank you so very much Jennifer

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 7, 2020 at 9:37 PM I feel this one. xomo Chris Green February 10, 2020 at 10:20 AM Thank you Maureen

Lindsay Laurie February 7, 2020 at 6:25 PM Hello Chris … very nicely presented indeed. Great poetry - thanks Chris - Lindsay Chris Green February 10, 2020 at 10:19 AM Thank you so very much Lindsay

Connie Marcum Wong February 7, 2020 at 4:26 PM Tomorrow is our full moon Chris. It inspires poets to write about its beauty. This is lovely Chris. xxoo Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 4:36 PM Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate you Connie

Line Gauthier February 7, 2020 at 12:44 PM Lovely precious moment with nature. Enjoyed your poem Chris. Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 12:58 PM Thank you so much Line.

Carolyn Devonshire February 7, 2020 at 12:30 PM I can see you looking up at the moon and waiting for daybreak, Chris. It seems like a metaphor for life itself as we spend so much time waiting for events to turn in our favor. Deep and beautifully penned, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 12:57 PM Thank you Carolyn. It sure could be because you are so right.

Daniel Turner February 7, 2020 at 10:06 AM Good morning Chris! Thanks for the sunrise:) Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 10:10 AM Good morning Daniel. You are welcome. : ) Thanks so much my friend.

Sandra Adams February 7, 2020 at 9:10 AM sounds like a beautiful sight to behold... we had fog so thick you couldn't see more than a few feet ahead of you and misty skies... that are now flooding skies...thanks for sharing the beauty with us, good morning Chris....wonderful poem btw Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 9:13 AM Thank you Sandy. It was a beautiful sight this morning as I left for work. I am happy you liked this. Good morning my friend.

Heidi Sands February 7, 2020 at 8:24 AM Good morning. Oh, I love this poem and know just what it is like to see the mist view in front of it! Nice writing, seeing it with the Oak tree. I hope you have more moments with the moon :) Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 8:35 AM Thank you Heidi. This is exactly what I saw this morning when I stepped outside. I appreciate your kindness

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 7, 2020 at 6:58 AM Smiles! Lovely verse my friend. xomo Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 7:16 AM Thank you Maureen.