Moments of Time CM

Two things in life we can't deny
View time of birth or when we die.
So in-between time ticks away
Know what we do will count each day.

Wise men will keep their time well-paced
Arise then fools, their time they'll waste
Our time creates our greatest test
Power each moment, do your best.

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Sotto Poet

August 18, 2026 at 10:45 AM

Dear Christine, your fantastic poem delivers a clear and thoughtful message about the importance of time in our lives. It uses a straightforward rhyme scheme that makes it easy to follow and understand. The contrast between wise and foolish use of time is effectively highlighted, encouraging readers to make the most of each moment.

Christine Watts

August 19, 2026 at 1:51 AM

Hi Sotto What a lovely review Thank you very much I enjoy the challenges of different styles and of course time is always ticking and we must be wise not foolish Cheers Christine Your review is much appreciated