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Moments of Surrender

forever is calling,
           simply falling all over me . .

i love the way your words sound
         to my soul,
the way they breathe life into my being

yes, i find myself completely lost in

your sweetness,
            in the accent
                       your heart holds,

the way life wraps around
                   your syllables,
and how it takes me
       to moments of surrender

                   . . i am yours


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Just a little scribble

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Anonomus Scorpio Date: 3/8/2023 6:34:00 PM This is extremely romantic, endearing, alluring, but most of all captivating! Love the flow and this passage in particular "i love the way your words sound to my soul, the way they breathe life into my being" Feeling Romance A.S. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/9/2023 7:06:00 PM Feeling romantic and being captivated is wonderful indeed. Your comment brings a smile to my heart and I'm blushing. Thank you, A.S. I appreciate you following me. I would send you a soup mail, but you don't have that feature turned on. My best to you. :) Brandy

Brian Strand Date: 9/30/2021 1:13:00 AM You have an eye for a pic Brandy,that accompany your poesy Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/30/2021 8:11:00 PM Such a wonderful compliment. Thank you, Brian. So kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy

John Watt Date: 8/28/2020 1:56:00 PM P.S. your smile is radiant in your new avatar. You look happy. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 8/28/2020 8:22:00 PM Awe, thank you John. I appreciate the compliment. I am happy. :) Brandy

John Watt Date: 8/28/2020 1:53:00 PM Yes, the words of a loved one breathe life into our being. Something to get completely lost in. Your words ripple down the page like a soothing waterfall. Thank you for the little scribble from my favorite scribbler. Charming poetry, Brandy. All the best ~ John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 8/28/2020 8:21:00 PM Such a sweet thing to say. "Your favorite scribbler" You know how to make me smile. Thank you John. The photo was missing on this post, so I added a new one. You and your thoughts are appreciated. You breathe life into your poetry, which I find amazing. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves Date: 12/8/2019 2:48:00 PM Very romantic write, words everyone longs to hear. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 12/8/2019 7:01:00 PM Thank you Robert. Just scribbling from the heart. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Phil Capitano Date: 11/12/2019 7:06:00 AM Beautiful write, Brandy, your words ebb and flow like liquid love filling the crevices of my empty heart. Very sensual. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/12/2019 4:49:00 PM "love filling the crevices of my empty heart" Your thoughts touch my heart. Thank you Phil. Your kind words are appreciated. Yes, this holds sensuality. ~ Brandy

Robert Lindley Date: 11/2/2019 3:24:00 PM This far, far more than just a little scribble my friend. A truly fine piece it is. A fav too. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/2/2019 5:33:00 PM You are so kind. Thank you Robert. Your thoughts bring a smile, lift my heart. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. :) Brandy

David Holmes Date: 10/31/2019 8:37:00 PM Brandy - wonderful, passionate, so well written, "forever calling, simply falling all over me......." beautiful. David Holmes Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/31/2019 10:45:00 PM Thank you David. Moments of love simply fall all over me. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Tobey Hill Date: 10/23/2019 12:56:00 PM Good afternoon ma'am. This is lovely! Is it a surrender to want, or maybe the want to surrender. Either way, good times ahead...TAH Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/23/2019 1:45:00 PM You are such a gentleman. The only one here that calls me ma'am. Thank you Tobey. It is- wanting to surrender. Of course, surrendering to the want- is an exciting thought. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

Susan Jeavons Date: 10/23/2019 11:22:00 AM Beautiful, sultry poem. Poetry is a passionate endeavor. Your poem surely displays that. Blessings, Susan Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/23/2019 1:40:00 PM Thank you Susan. Your wonderful comment brings a smile to my heart. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

Silent One Date: 10/22/2019 1:33:00 PM I know the feeling, many have felt like this towards me... hahaha.... sensual and seductive poetry.... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/22/2019 7:34:00 PM I am sure you do know the feeling. Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you Silent One. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/22/2019 12:14:00 PM WOW Brandy a passionate, sensuous write, provocative but so well crafted and creatively penned . Well Done, Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/22/2019 7:33:00 PM Yes, there is Passion in Poetry. Such a wonderful comment. Thank you Jennifer. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May Date: 10/22/2019 7:48:00 AM Words breathing passion in the soul, Wondery write Brandy Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/22/2019 11:00:00 AM Thank you Joseph. There is passion in moments of love. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 10/21/2019 3:11:00 PM The sweetness in the accent his heart holds must be very intoxicating to take you to moments of surrender. Beautiful poetry my sweet friend. All my best. Hugs, John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/21/2019 5:24:00 PM Moments of sweetness and the light touch of love- leave me breathless. So easily. Thank you John for your kind words. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Panagiota Romios Date: 10/21/2019 2:37:00 PM Beyond beautiful! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/21/2019 3:47:00 PM Thank you Panagiota. So kind of you to say. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/21/2019 11:41:00 AM The sound of this poem is special like a moment of surrender can be..excellent..evocative..charming..love the ending. So well written, Brandy. I was travelling last few days..hope I didn't miss nay of your poems. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/21/2019 1:56:00 PM These moments of surrender, are ones filled with love. As the heart flutters softly. Thank you Vijay, for your lovely comment. Welcome back! You haven't missed any of my poems. I appreciate you and your support. :) Brandy

Chris Green Date: 10/21/2019 7:59:00 AM Absolutely beautiful my friend. Soft, alluring and so very enchanting. It is so nice to see something new from you. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/21/2019 1:22:00 PM Thank you Chris. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your pen holds many moments of love. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael Date: 10/21/2019 6:11:00 AM Serious loving here...to the breath of each letter...I can't imagine Just a little More scribble... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/21/2019 1:14:00 PM Oh my!!! Imagine more, because my pen can scribble so much more. Just sayin'. Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Lawrence Sharp Date: 10/21/2019 12:18:00 AM Your words are sweet as honey, Belle, as always. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/21/2019 1:11:00 PM Thank you Lawrence. You know me, always lingering in moments of love. :) Brandy

Line Gauthier Date: 10/20/2019 11:04:00 PM Lovely poem, Brandy. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/21/2019 1:10:00 PM Thank you Line. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/20/2019 9:12:00 PM Pretty! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/20/2019 10:17:00 PM :) Keith, you make me blush!! Brandy Nicole Date: 10/20/2019 10:16:00 PM Thank you Kim! My best to you. :) Brandy