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Want to see the photography collection which inspired this piece?                                                                                                                                                   Go to https://jeanniecronin.picfair.com/


 

Moments of Mine

The lace of a Lily
and grace of a bee
the face of a flower 
and sun on the sea
Silhouette shadows
cloud painted skies
rivers of peace 
a bird as she flies 
colorful lichen
the succulents glow
still water mirrors
and Autumn’s first show
All of them captured
as moments in time
life’s truest treasure 
these moments of mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcconnell Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Superb imagery and lovely flow with stunning rhyme. Hope all's well Jeannie, be safe and sure always, have a great Christmas, blessings from Scotland, Gordon
Cronin Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 8:01 PM
Thank you, Gordon. Your comments are always so very kind.
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 11:35 AM
fave
Cronin Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Thanks Andrea, that’s awesome:)
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 11:35 AM
I adore poems with short lines. I adore this poem!!
Cronin Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Glad you liked it. If you copy and paste that picfair link you will see most of the photos that inspired the piece. Thanks for the kind words
Leffanta Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 10:44 AM
You noticed! Well done, indeed! Aloha!
Cronin Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Now if we could just get it to all end on a happy note. Thanks for the comment.
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