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Moments of Magic

MOMENTS OF MAGIC

when I was young
oh maybe five minutes ago
I would spin 
beneath the coolness of the ancient elm
it smiled down on me
through the suns rays
all golden, green and happy

like a soft top whirl about
arms outstretched 
hands float, white leaves
on effervescent air
heart thrum 
heavy even rhythms 
perhaps a call to somewhere

bared feet a whirly gig
in young grass 
soak up the energy of the earth
absorb the world so far way
I was safe caught up in my dream
then, to collapse on the ground 
waiting for the earth to spin in answer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/7/2022 10:22:00 PM
Wow!
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Date: 10/3/2018 7:14:00 AM
I have so missed you and your lines from the heart. You have been my inspiration.
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Date: 6/17/2018 1:06:00 PM
I personally would prefer to say "Pure unadulterated genius"...but that is just my own unqualified opinion I guess. I hope you are keeping well, Patricia. Your friend. :) john
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Date: 6/15/2018 4:50:00 PM
Ah! What a thrill! Every word. Lovely to read you today lovely :) I'm Faving this gem. Glorious. xomo <3
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 6/15/2018 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Lady Poetess.

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