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'moments of Fun'

watch the sun catch the clouds outstretch arms clutch like shrouds bare feet along the beach rare moments of fun pair with nature’s splendor share days in the sun 290720111410

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/14/2011 1:07:00 PM

sas..short and sweet. I love it..congrats. BG

Jack Horne

Date: 8/13/2011 3:58:00 PM

Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2011 1:40:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Rick, Wilma

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/13/2011 10:54:00 AM

Yes, easy, breezy feel. Love it. Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2011 9:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by ^Rick Parise "Lento Poetry" Wilma. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 8/13/2011 8:32:00 AM

hey Wilma, congrats on your HM, David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/12/2011 11:53:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your HM in Lento Poetry my friend with these wonderful words luv.. also Rick asked me to pass along his congrats to u as well luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2011 11:47:00 PM

hmmm, i had not seen this one before? It's so short and sweet. Congrats on your HM. I enjoyed the picture this made, wilma.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/12/2011 10:00:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your HM in Rick's contest.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/9/2011 8:21:00 PM

I haven't been there in years and now have a yearning to go. It describes the scene perfectly

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 7/31/2011 7:20:00 PM

I feel relaxed, I can feel the sand betwwen me toes, looking at you with beads of salt sea water on your skin awaiting your permission for that Kiss. Love you and the poem too :-)

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/31/2011 7:10:00 AM

A colourful and creative picture poem. Beautiful! xoxo Robert.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/30/2011 1:18:00 PM

Well what I would sure give to have this fun day right now! Really like how the short lines work here, made me smile and wish I was walking along the shore right now and catching those clouds (wouldn't hurt either if they were cotton candy clouds) ... mwahugs

Kash Poet

Date: 7/29/2011 3:43:00 PM

Love it Wilma...very nice picture you have painted here..Best wishes in the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/29/2011 2:55:00 PM

I am so there Wilma..where is this grand place luv? we are at beach in triple digits today ..107 in the shade but cool in the ocean luv.. more awesome words to relax by luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/29/2011 12:55:00 PM

Very creative image of the sun stretching arms to catch the clouds so people can enjoy a day of fun at the beach. Lovely verse, dear Wilma. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/29/2011 10:15:00 AM

Your poetry is very interesting and holds the readers attention from start to finish Wilma. Have a splendid weekend and I will return to read more of your writing soon. Love, Carol