'moments of Fun'

watch the sun catch the clouds outstretch arms clutch like shrouds bare feet along the beach rare moments of fun pair with nature’s splendor share days in the sun
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gorelick Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 1:07 PM
sas..short and sweet. I love it..congrats. BG
Horne Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )
Mehta Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Rick, Wilma
Ramage Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Yes, easy, breezy feel. Love it. Lee
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by ^Rick Parise "Lento Poetry" Wilma. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 8:32 AM
hey Wilma, congrats on your HM, David
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 11:53 PM
Congrats Wilma on your HM in Lento Poetry my friend with these wonderful words luv.. also Rick asked me to pass along his congrats to u as well luv..
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 11:47 PM
hmmm, i had not seen this one before? It's so short and sweet. Congrats on your HM. I enjoyed the picture this made, wilma.
Poet Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 10:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your HM in Rick's contest.
Wesley Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 8:21 PM
I haven't been there in years and now have a yearning to go. It describes the scene perfectly
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 7:20 PM
I feel relaxed, I can feel the sand betwwen me toes, looking at you with beads of salt sea water on your skin awaiting your permission for that Kiss. Love you and the poem too :-)
Zzzzz Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 7:10 AM
A colourful and creative picture poem. Beautiful! xoxo Robert.
K. Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Well what I would sure give to have this fun day right now! Really like how the short lines work here, made me smile and wish I was walking along the shore right now and catching those clouds (wouldn't hurt either if they were cotton candy clouds) ... mwahugs
Poet Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Love it Wilma...very nice picture you have painted here..Best wishes in the contest.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 2:55 PM
I am so there Wilma..where is this grand place luv? we are at beach in triple digits today ..107 in the shade but cool in the ocean luv.. more awesome words to relax by luv..
Devonshire Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Very creative image of the sun stretching arms to catch the clouds so people can enjoy a day of fun at the beach. Lovely verse, dear Wilma. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Your poetry is very interesting and holds the readers attention from start to finish Wilma. Have a splendid weekend and I will return to read more of your writing soon. Love, Carol
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