Moments

MOMENTS Moments Of awareness Times spent in your presence Treasured and valued forever A lover of the mind, body and soul You kept deep emotions for me To cherish and relish Love hidden in Moments © Kim van Breda—20 October 2014
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Saunders Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Simple yet with such great meaning, Kim.
Valles Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 12:36 AM
Beautiful. I reminds me to be thankful for so many moments. Thank you for sharing your gift.
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Good poem. Love. xxxxxx rajat
Hicks Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 1:38 AM
Beautiful in it's simplicity. Free-flowing and comes full circle... like the moments you described. Never heard of rictameter before, perhaps I better look into it!
Peterson Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 12:56 AM
How beautifully you draped the empty scaffold of this form.
Yvonne Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 5:13 AM
Just gorgeous. I will fav this one for my collection.
Tacito Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Gorgeous. Treasuring the simple pleasures & memories.
Van Breda Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 3:24 AM
Hi there my friend... Thanks for stopping by.. it's been awhile. I must go and visit your poems to see your latest penned excellence. Xx~Xx
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