Moments

I am in the moment
a moment of time
a creative light of being
with a fast achieving love
taking nothing for granted
not even the sun or stars can shine
with the hole in my heart
and the weakened soul
with a love of enchantment
a cry that claims me
one more moment of time....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Williams Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Brooke an excellent snap shot of life....David
Sirak Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Amazing poem! This makes one think about the moments that lay claim to our hearts. How are you my friend?
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Your skill and talent shine in this lovely poem Brooke. Nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie
Lamoureux Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 7:40 AM
I had a few moments so I thought reading this one again would be an exquisite use of my time. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Taking things for granted can leave us disillusioned. Love has to be nourished and looked after; thus joy can usually replace sadness. Enjoyed this lovely write, Brooke. // paul
Deschler Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 12:23 PM
So many moments go by in our lifetime and just disappear forever. But we, as poets, can capture them and keep them with us always. You just did that beautifully, Brooke. Very well done!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 8:23 AM
I hope all your sad moments fall into happy. This captured my heart and caused me to ponder my moments.
Lindley Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 3:36 PM
Some moments are truly priceless. My wife says such are when she finds my poems on her pillow early morn!! Little does she know that I need no praise to continue writing them!! A big Bravo, on truly fine write my friend!!
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May 24, 2014 at 12:05 PM
Hi Brooke, Stopped by to say hello and I read this write. Brooke this was just amazing Simply amazing but very sad and I hope the days that follow this are bright and warm with knowing care~ and loving days are in your horizon.Always. Thanks so much for sharing this write with us. Always your friend~ Love and Peace, Deborah
Dylan Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Deborah thank you I had a wonderful memorial weekend.. too much fun..lol...I hope you had a great one too..
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