Moments

I am in the moment a moment of time a creative light of being with a fast achieving love taking nothing for granted not even the sun or stars can shine with the hole in my heart and the weakened soul with a love of enchantment a cry that claims me one more moment of time....

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David Williams

Date: 6/3/2014 7:38:00 AM

Brooke an excellent snap shot of life....David

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/3/2014 5:57:00 AM

Amazing poem! This makes one think about the moments that lay claim to our hearts. How are you my friend?

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/2/2014 6:04:00 AM

Your skill and talent shine in this lovely poem Brooke. Nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/1/2014 7:40:00 AM

I had a few moments so I thought reading this one again would be an exquisite use of my time. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/28/2014 11:19:00 AM

Taking things for granted can leave us disillusioned. Love has to be nourished and looked after; thus joy can usually replace sadness. Enjoyed this lovely write, Brooke. // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/27/2014 12:23:00 PM

So many moments go by in our lifetime and just disappear forever. But we, as poets, can capture them and keep them with us always. You just did that beautifully, Brooke. Very well done!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/25/2014 8:23:00 AM

I hope all your sad moments fall into happy. This captured my heart and caused me to ponder my moments.

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/24/2014 3:36:00 PM

Some moments are truly priceless. My wife says such are when she finds my poems on her pillow early morn!! Little does she know that I need no praise to continue writing them!! A big Bravo, on truly fine write my friend!!

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/24/2014 12:05:00 PM

Hi Brooke, Stopped by to say hello and I read this write. Brooke this was just amazing Simply amazing but very sad and I hope the days that follow this are bright and warm with knowing care~ and loving days are in your horizon.Always. Thanks so much for sharing this write with us. Always your friend~ Love and Peace, Deborah

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/25/2014 10:41:00 PM

Deborah thank you I had a wonderful memorial weekend.. too much fun..lol...I hope you had a great one too..