Moments

I have traveled 
my whole life 
to be this far from you
 
Moments 
have passed by 
like the miles 
that lie between us
 
The wind 
has carried you 
my nameless name

 © Christine A Kysely All Rights Reserved
 (November 4, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin USA)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 3:37 AM
This is heartfelt, and reminds me of people in the service and how they must often feel.
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 6:13 PM
What a thought provoking write.
Thajudeen Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 8:02 PM
The wind is in game with the nameless name.Sad.
Belle Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 6:33 PM
it strikes me sad.. powerful write. LoveLots, Ar
Branston Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 11:06 AM
I like the way you paint it. Can relate, not to much not to little. Ty well enjoyed.
Ellis Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Very pleasant read. Thank you for sharing
Karim Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Good write!
Austin Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Moments so easily gone with the wind are impossible to recover, the sensation nameless. This is what comes through for me. Love, Dave
Gismeroy Olafsen Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:50 PM
"I have traveled my whole life to be this far from you" Wow. A beginning that takes ones breath away. Very good!
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