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Momento of Waters

Oh come, my love, to tranquil shores follow paths of lilies to me. By light of dawn my heart breaks more silent teardrops filling the sea. Written on 3/6/2015

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Matt Forshay

Date: 3/8/2015 1:42:00 PM

This is a beautiful piece, I really enjoyed it.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/8/2015 2:29:00 PM

Thank you, Matt, for your kind comment! These short poems are challenging to write, but I'm glad when they come together!

John Fleming

Date: 3/7/2015 12:43:00 AM

Laura, this really is quite lovely...very well done indeed!! :) john.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2015 9:31:00 AM

Thank you, John! I appreciate your kind comment:)

David Mohn

Date: 3/6/2015 9:31:00 PM

This is really beautiful and well written Laura...you are going to do well with this

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/6/2015 10:18:00 PM

Thank you, David, for your encouraging comment! I really appreciate it. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2015 6:45:00 PM

beautifully penned with lovely imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/6/2015 7:14:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, for your kind comments and supportive words~!