Laura Leiser Poet Verse

Momento of Waters

Oh come, my love, to tranquil shores
             follow paths of lilies
                     to me.

By light of dawn my heart breaks more
             silent teardrops filling
                     the sea.












Written on 3/6/2015

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Matt Forshay March 8, 2015 at 1:42 PM This is a beautiful piece, I really enjoyed it. Laura Leiser March 8, 2015 at 2:29 PM Thank you, Matt, for your kind comment! These short poems are challenging to write, but I'm glad when they come together!

John Fleming March 7, 2015 at 12:43 AM Laura, this really is quite lovely...very well done indeed!! :) john. Laura Leiser March 7, 2015 at 9:31 AM Thank you, John! I appreciate your kind comment:)

David Mohn March 6, 2015 at 9:31 PM This is really beautiful and well written Laura...you are going to do well with this Laura Leiser March 6, 2015 at 10:18 PM Thank you, David, for your encouraging comment! I really appreciate it. :)

Jan Allison March 6, 2015 at 6:45 PM beautifully penned with lovely imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Laura Leiser March 6, 2015 at 7:14 PM Thank you, Jan, for your kind comments and supportive words~!