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Moment To Moment

Sometimes I feel like there is nobody who understands me and I am bound shut. Then another moment passes while I see your heart open up. Moment to moment time passes by and I can be Free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/16/2009 9:33:00 PM
I like this Diminished Hexaverse. Good write.
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:18:00 PM
Another great piece! Your words come to life and reach out to the reader. I love your style!
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Date: 1/26/2009 5:22:00 AM
Wow Sue. This is an awesome write in one of my favorite forms. I know the feeling well, both of them. Especially it seems more often the first part. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/26/2009 5:16:00 AM
Sue this is excellent use of this form - I often share these feelings - great write - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/25/2009 2:35:00 PM
This is a very good write Sue because I encounter those same feelings. This is a honest write .
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