Sue Mason Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Moment To Moment

Sometimes I feel like
there is nobody
who understands me
and I am bound shut.

Then another
moment passes
while I see your
heart open up.

Moment to
moment time
passes by

and I
can be

Free.

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Belinda Parish February 16, 2009 at 9:33 PM I like this Diminished Hexaverse. Good write.

Deborah Herber February 3, 2009 at 5:18 PM Another great piece! Your words come to life and reach out to the reader. I love your style!

Sharon Winter January 26, 2009 at 5:22 AM Wow Sue. This is an awesome write in one of my favorite forms. I know the feeling well, both of them. Especially it seems more often the first part. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan January 26, 2009 at 5:16 AM Sue this is excellent use of this form - I often share these feelings - great write - God Bless, MJ

Christopher Higgins January 25, 2009 at 2:35 PM This is a very good write Sue because I encounter those same feelings. This is a honest write .