Moment of Whispered Memory

Elusive moment, lost in time to memory
Just whispers on the clock

Elusive memory, lost to the moment
Are held within the tick

Elusive whispers, a memory lost in time
A rare moment on the clock

Elusive to time, whispers of a memory
Forever lost within the tock
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 17, 2010 at 12:02 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Paula. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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August 16, 2010 at 6:17 PM
What a creative use of the ticks and tocks to convey the passage of time. Great write, Paula! Love, Carolyn
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