Moment of Truth

Like an epiphany in a clouded mind
      Lightening splits the sky after dusk
      Revealing hidden things- shrouded 
      mysteries secrets no more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Graham Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 11:49 AM
You have a certain gift Sherese and your writing transports and reveals. This is the last thing you've written for a while. I hope you're well.
Gooden Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 7:08 PM
Thanks Patricia. Same here.
Tsiluma Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 12:34 AM
Striking imagery you've created Sherese! The though of lightening on a clouded mind is terrifying - it can either destroy or build up. Well written!
Gregory Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 12:33 PM
nice read... thks
Gooden Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Thanks, G.
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:50 PM
a revelation moment!! Nice one.
Gooden Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 7:10 PM
Thanks Andrea.
May Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 8:28 PM
I love that first line....wonderful write...love
Gooden Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 7:10 PM
Thanks Joseph.
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