Moment of Truth

smiling --
she stirs cold coffee
and waits

a vision of bottles, baths and baby powder in her life

again --
the movement 
within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 12:31 AM
Did you discuss this in a blog some time ago? It seems changed now. I didn't like it as well the first time I saw it but now it seems better to me. maybe you enhance it or made it into more. Or maybe I just am in a better mood to enjoy it this time!
Richards Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 9:36 AM
This is so wonderful..........I enjoyed your blog, and this amazing poetry !! Thank you!
Henderson Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Thank you Carrie, I really feel this form can fly. Your support really means a lot.
Collins Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Dear Charles - So unique, so touching. Bravo! love, Kathy
Henderson Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 10:35 AM
So, nice a comment. Thank you Kathryn.
Roberts Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 2:38 AM
Wow am speechless ...Seren
Henderson Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Seren, you make me blush. Thanks
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