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Moment of Truth

smiling -- she stirs cold coffee and waits a vision of bottles, baths and baby powder in her life again -- the movement within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/21/2013 12:31:00 AM
Did you discuss this in a blog some time ago? It seems changed now. I didn't like it as well the first time I saw it but now it seems better to me. maybe you enhance it or made it into more. Or maybe I just am in a better mood to enjoy it this time!
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Date: 7/28/2013 9:36:00 AM
This is so wonderful..........I enjoyed your blog, and this amazing poetry !! Thank you!
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Charles Henderson
Date: 7/28/2013 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Carrie, I really feel this form can fly. Your support really means a lot.
Date: 7/28/2013 7:51:00 AM
Dear Charles - So unique, so touching. Bravo! love, Kathy
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Charles Henderson
Date: 7/28/2013 10:35:00 AM
So, nice a comment. Thank you Kathryn.
Date: 7/28/2013 2:38:00 AM
Wow am speechless ...Seren
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Charles Henderson
Date: 7/28/2013 10:33:00 AM
Seren, you make me blush. Thanks

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