Notes About The Poem

and love a sudden summer storm!

- Moment Of Midsummer -


Summer's splendor
Is dreamer's gold
Hello, June
Lack of clothes
Feet without shoes

Gosh, what did I say
Heavy rain
Ocean winds ice cold
Slight storm 20.8 - 24.4 (m / s)
Temperature 12  °C

I repeat :
Summer's splendor
Is dreamer's gold
The climate's whimsical fluctuations
I'm soaked and cold

Atsjo ... echo of a sneeze
I feel absolutely alive
It's a gorgeous day

Tomorrow ...
For better or for worse
I love you no matter what











15.06.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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In The Moment Poetry Contest
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Honorable Mention 18.06.2018
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Nature's elements makes life a challenge, a dread or a joy filled with inspiration. Your poem expresses both beautifully A-L. xxoo ; )
Andresen Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:15 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Congratulations on your win! Well done. The weather can keep us in the moment for sure. Bless you!
Andresen Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:15 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rebstock Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Oh my goodness, and I complain about MO cold. At least we do have a warm spell. Enjoyed. Congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 3:26 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and congratulations, Shirley :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Beautiful Anne-Lise! Congratulations :)
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 2:18 PM
- Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Aahh! I just LOVE this one, Anne-Lise. It's PERFECT !! Weather gone Mad, so to speak, which perfectly portrays the situation in so many locales these days...It's a FAVE! :) :) gw
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 2:15 PM
- An honor and pleasure ... many thanks for your visit, comment and your fave, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 11:40 AM
We had a massive downpour yesterday for about ten minutes!!! My front and back garden were flooded... Your poem described it perfectly...
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 12:17 PM
- It gets so dry the ground ... the rain does not draw into the soil ... - Many thanks for your visit and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Doll Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Wonderful poem, Anne-Lise. No matter what the weather, it is good to be alive!
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 8:30 AM
- But in the summer we need some sunshine ... it's easier to smile in the sunshine, Warren :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horn Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 8:52 PM
No matter where you are sooner or later there will be sunshine.
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 8:28 AM
- Behind the clouds, the sky is always blue ... so true, James :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 4:34 PM
You are truly a smile of sunshine Anne Lise.
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 8:27 AM
- Many thanks Pashang, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 3:40 PM
As they say rain never hurt anyone and you can look forward to the sunshine. Love the weather in summer. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 8:26 AM
- I love the summer ... with a little rain and a lot of sunshine - Many thanks for the lovely comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 11:48 AM
well worth the wait , this summer will come soon, anne... what a lovely poem... happy huggs!
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 2:09 PM
- Many thanks Nette, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Don't worry Sunshine we've had rain here too. But it does make us appreciate the brighter days. Tom Good luck.
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 2:08 PM
- You're absolutely right, Tom :) - We need both sun and rain :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Love you too no matter what! Lovely write my friend, Anne-Lise although true winder seems to exist around your area! Witty! Good luck!
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 2:06 PM
- That was sweet said, dear Demetrios :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Summer arrived here early, back in May. It is around the century mark here. Time to find a swimming hole! I loved your fun poem and sorry about the fluctuating weather but I'll bet you're used to it.
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 2:03 PM
- Yes, we're used to it Daniel ... be sure - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 4:04 PM
the season is definitely giving us variations of the weather, we've had long spells of sunshine now storm and hopefully we will get some much needed rain:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 2:02 PM
- After several weeks of beautiful weather ... the rain came ... it will probably come to you too, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Happy moments..summer theme..best for a win, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 1:59 PM
- Many thanks Vijay, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:05 PM
It's a humid 35 here until next Tues...bring the sunscreen
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:14 PM
- I bring fins and survival suits, Tim :) - hugs and thanks // Anne-Lise :)
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