Notes About The Poem

Moment of Grace

A woman twirling 
Like a dervish
Hula hoops rotating 
Around her chest and waist



Date written and posted: 04/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one.
Ibeh Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Sorry for replying so late, Richard. I'm just seeing your reply for the first time. Thank you!:-)
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