Moment No 1 Point Five
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This poem was apart of a writing exercise where I take an original piece and write the poem backward. This poem I chose was Moment No1; which version do you like better?
A smile can change everything
And everything has worn the same outfit since Adam and Eve started sewing designer fig leaves
Which leads me to the conclusion…No, you’re not my person but for 3 seconds it felt a 10-year anniversary
A moment framed in my better day’s gallery
Knowing we were both thinking something similar means everything to me
I know we’ll probably never see each other again
So, I shrug up a favorable smile
Her smile isn’t hiding so there’s no need for me to seek
Then Eye contact starts to feel like body contact
You’re walking inside
I’m walking out
p.s. this was just a night cap at quick trip…
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