Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Moment In Time

A moment in time, frozen in my mind

Vision of beauty,

an angel in my eye

Sunshine sparkling down

Brightening up my cloudy days


Life was on the downturn

spiraling

lost...

out of control

Nights of loneliness. days of false smiles

A few choice words,

consoling my cries

Those killer smiles you gave

Those deep caramelized eyes,

giving solace to my broken heart 

Taking my hand,

you lead me from the deep,

into the light.

Upon the next shooting star

To you, I devote my heart.

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Sandra Haight October 28, 2014 at 10:25 AM A very beautiful poem with deep emotion, Tim. I touched my heart. Sandra

Casarah Nance October 28, 2014 at 6:44 AM Those deep caramelized eyes giving solace to my broken heart-Wow what a great line-I dig this one sweets, glad to read you as always xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2014 at 4:04 AM - What a beautiful poem, Tim !!! - Love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter October 28, 2014 at 3:12 AM Well expressed torrents of emotions spilling here in this write, Tim. I wish that all your good wishes upon a star come true one day for you ;) Love & hugs! xxxx D.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 27, 2014 at 11:00 PM Love the frozen moments n the killer smiles, great passionate write Tim!

Russell Sivey October 27, 2014 at 10:39 PM "upon the next shooting star" wow, what a line my friend! You have surely enlightened me by your tenderness you exuded within this awesome poem Tim! You have expressed your love in brilliant light, I truly loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Maurice Yvonne October 27, 2014 at 8:22 PM Love this Tim, excellent. Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 10:30 PM Thank you kind sir Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 10:25 PM Thank you kind sir

Paul Callus October 27, 2014 at 5:21 PM So very romantic Tim! ... and the final two lines are great. well done! // paul Tim Smith October 27, 2014 at 5:23 PM Thank you Paul my good friend.....Tim

Dan Helppi October 27, 2014 at 4:09 PM I love the last lines! Tim Smith October 27, 2014 at 4:12 PM Thank you Dan....I like them as well. . Tim

Jan Allison October 27, 2014 at 4:09 PM wow this is one of your best Tim love the caramelised eyes - stunning line - into faves and a 7 hugs jan xxx Tim Smith October 27, 2014 at 4:12 PM Thanks Jan....This just flowed....hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans October 27, 2014 at 3:20 PM One of your great ones Tim. Very beautifully written. Tim Smith October 27, 2014 at 3:28 PM Thank you Brenda...You are so sweet...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop October 27, 2014 at 3:05 PM I'm checking the night sky...for the next falling star.. So beautiful this is Tim..So romantic,and with a happy feel to it.You deserve all the light cause you are not a taker of love ,you re a giver,So you deserve not to be sad-Beautiful,and a favourite!Charma Tim Smith October 27, 2014 at 3:13 PM Thank You dear Charma....I hope the stars are out tonight...hugs Tim