Moment at the Fence

white tail flipped up
     nice 
       set
  of antlers
   curious
      about
the white dog
   on other side 

of the fence
  stag
    so close
      then gone
as if the deer
  just vanished
    as if
it was never there

my imagination
  retains
     the momentum
of magic

the moment
  the muse
snapped
    the shot

it was the only way
  because
there was no time
      to waste

my heart racing
   whilst my husband slept

as soon as I made my move
  the impetus was interrupted

who knows which way hither
                       he went
         or thither
leapt

the neighbor-dog’s not telling
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Hind Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 2:21 PM
Wow, cool writing, Kim...ah, the muse... <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 3:29 PM
Yes, the muse! Hip hip hooray!
Cunningham Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 8:22 AM
What could have been a camera moment, still you have the memory of it. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 9:28 AM
I wasn’t close enough to a camera! I knew he wouldn’t be there long. :)
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