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Moment at the Fence

white tail flipped up nice set of antlers curious about the white dog on other side of the fence stag so close then gone as if the deer just vanished as if it was never there my imagination retains the momentum of magic the moment the muse snapped the shot it was the only way because there was no time to waste my heart racing whilst my husband slept as soon as I made my move the impetus was interrupted who knows which way hither he went or thither leapt the neighbor-dog’s not telling

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Date: 8/27/2024 2:21:00 PM
Wow, cool writing, Kim...ah, the muse... <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 3:29:00 PM
Yes, the muse! Hip hip hooray!
Date: 8/27/2024 8:22:00 AM
What could have been a camera moment, still you have the memory of it. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 9:28:00 AM
I wasn’t close enough to a camera! I knew he wouldn’t be there long. :)

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