Moment

When my mind alit
(when the world was still)
upon curvatures
of breath and silence
and a glance's grace

When my mouth paused
(the world was dark)
on synonyms
for devotion

eyes rested,
trouble was
vanquished then

and one
sad soul

slept
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 20, 2008 at 3:04 AM
Hey there, long time no see, my friend! Thank you for entering this amazing poem in my contest and congrats on third place. This peice was moving, mind-bending and enlightening, you are a shining star, as always, love and miss you! Kristin
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September 17, 2008 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations Tracy on your win in Kristin's contest! Extremely well deserved. Your poetry is always exceptional. Love, Shar
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