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Mom in Teardrop

Mom in teardrop
Memories on cheek
A moment in movie
Moving emotion
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I need those tearjerkers 
I need to feel the past
Not merely leave it
All behind
My mom’s not in the ashes
She’s in my heart’s cache
Dreams and reality mix
A cross upon my mother’s chest
Have I left that room
I have room left for joy and sorrow
An elixir I drink during the holidays
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Dad’s legs move him
Once again in someone else’s car
He goes where he doesn’t want to
But he’s still glad to be with family
Is he still back in hospice
Waiting for Mom
To die
To kiss her one last time
To collect her rings
Which he pleasured to give her
When he proposed and married her
Did I tell you, he proposed on the railroad tracks?
It’s Christmas Eve
Time stops us in our tracks
A baby born, a Son executed, our hope
Our
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My mom’s middle name
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Hind Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 5:29 PM
Sentimental and broken too, beautiful work, dear Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 8:07 AM
Wow what a tribute and a treasure of beautiful memories of your parents. I hope your Christmas was a delight, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 3:20 PM
Thank you and to you too! merry Christmas! Mine was very nice! At my house this year. Hugs
Wolf Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 8:17 PM
Kim. You are a forever sentimentalist, young lady. And that's a GOOD THING. Merry Christmas to you and yours. ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 7:08 AM
I appreciate you, Gershon! I hope you’ve had a blessed Hanukkah and Happy New Year to all of you!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 3:50 PM
this poem resonated with me....especially liked: My mom’s not in the ashes She’s in my heart’s cache Dreams and reality mix
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, Sara! Merry Christmas!
Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 8:37 AM
This is an awesome one about your mom and about Christmas with its gift that gives us hope and it keeps on giving. Thank you for sharing. Let me say once again, I can truly say I have the deepest sympathy for you and your family at this time. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 3:30 PM
Thank you, Sara..likewise, my friend
Goldsmith Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 8:33 AM
What a wonderful yet sad write you have here. Great Picture... Life can come with much joy and many teardrops. Have A Great/Blessed Christmas Eve..........
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 3:30 PM
Yes it can. Thank you, Paula!
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