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Mom I Want To Be That Naughty Son Again

I wished if I was a child again Life was full of fun again I wished if I was your naughty son again And you were my cute mama again Doing silly mistakes In very simple games Mom you still used to come and hug me that day And I used to win for you every next day Mom will you please come and hug me today? I want to be your winner again I was dad's headache Studies was my week point Mom you used to bake a cake and make me study that day I used to study for your cake that day Mom I need you to bake that cake for me today I am ready to face any exam today Trying to impress every girl Being a hero of everyone Mom you secretly used to let me do it that way And I used to be your hero always Mom will you please let me do it today? And I want to be your hero again I wished if I was a child again Life was full of fun again I wished if I was your naughty son again And you were my cute mama again I wished If I was old me again And you were my cute old mama again Written for Mom contest on 24th April 2016 sponsored by Francine Roberts

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Date: 4/12/2017 12:44:00 AM
Oh to be a child again is perhaps every ones desire.well written past relived. Your wish to have the cake is a emotional want.
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/13/2017 1:43:00 AM
Thank you for your sweet words dear friend....I have had the best childhood and best mom in the world...
Date: 2/25/2017 9:27:00 AM
It really touched my heart... Very lovely poem...
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Anand Parmale
Date: 2/25/2017 11:28:00 AM
Thank you friend
Date: 5/1/2016 1:02:00 PM
- A lovely poem, which gives me a smile on my mouth - a time that will never come back, but the memories are forever :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/28/2016 3:06:00 PM
Reads like a winner..I enjoyed reading your work..If I have not said so before welcome to soup..I hope your stay is long and filled with many great posts..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/29/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Sara...
Date: 4/28/2016 1:24:00 PM
Anand I cast my eyes to your poem want to be the naughty boy again glimpse me much while I was a child and was so obstinate to get things from mum that it filmed me now. Nice composition.
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/29/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Deepak
Date: 4/28/2016 1:10:00 PM
Mothers deserve the best their children could offer dear, Anand and this is a beautiful tribute to the lady who brought you to life! Excellent writing. A seven!
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/29/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thanks dear Dem
Date: 4/25/2016 11:38:00 PM
oops, I should have said "like Victor said" how did I get Catie from that???
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/26/2016 11:51:00 AM
I got it...
Date: 4/25/2016 11:37:00 PM
this is really cute, Arnand. Like Catie says, it's original!! Very fun reading. I like the personal sincere nature of it.
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/26/2016 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for your constant support.....

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