Mom

MOM

christmas morn – she’s up
prestodigitating appetite
only one soul before
the largest package under the tree
shredded carelessly

Dave Austin

christmastanka

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Mahtab Bangalee

August 19, 2020 at 4:16 AM

beautiful Tanka on MOM

Maurice Yvonne

January 10, 2015 at 8:24 AM

Was that you trying to open the largest package under the tree Daver. You did leave it open to interpretation. I have the most adorable image in mind.

Sara Kendrick

January 1, 2015 at 4:26 AM

I wonder who opened that package? Great one to creative questions..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the visit to my page..Doris is okay so far..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 26, 2014 at 7:42 AM

A tribute in a classic style, daver, Merry Christmas

Andrea Dietrich

December 26, 2014 at 1:11 AM

You little rascal under the tree, Daver!! cute lovely tribute to your mom.

Poet Destroyer A

December 25, 2014 at 10:11 PM

Hello Daver, one of my all time favorite poet.... I like this and this morning, I made pancakes, not under a tree. A wonderful poem, hope you are well. Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~