Mom

MOM christmas morn – she’s up prestodigitating appetite only one soul before the largest package under the tree shredded carelessly Dave Austin

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 8/19/2020 4:16:00 AM

beautiful Tanka on MOM

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/10/2015 8:24:00 AM

Was that you trying to open the largest package under the tree Daver. You did leave it open to interpretation. I have the most adorable image in mind.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2015 4:26:00 AM

I wonder who opened that package? Great one to creative questions..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the visit to my page..Doris is okay so far..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/26/2014 7:42:00 AM

A tribute in a classic style, daver, Merry Christmas

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2014 1:11:00 AM

You little rascal under the tree, Daver!! cute lovely tribute to your mom.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2014 10:11:00 PM

Hello Daver, one of my all time favorite poet.... I like this and this morning, I made pancakes, not under a tree. A wonderful poem, hope you are well. Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/25/2014 2:11:00 PM

voracious write much like the theme, daver... love the cryptic inages.. have a glorious holiday!.. huggs

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 12/25/2014 10:31:00 AM

Mom,a great.A nice theme.Regards. -Safa